Okay, I've only begun reading Dead Beat so I haven't met Carlos yet but spoilers be darned! I couldn't resist reading when I saw you'd written another Carlos fic. I like Carlos' letting the reader see his discomfort and understanding his regret. I especially liked you going from Harry to the flashback and bringing us back with Carlos and Molly. :)
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Date: 2008-06-21 10:49 pm (UTC)